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Slenderman by GAGBAGCHEN

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OH MAI
This certainly is Slendy like we've never seen him before.
It's really original, of course, and it sort of looks at him in an artsy obscure kind of way. It's very different from any other take I've seen on him before.
I also like the subtlety. For instance, If you added any colour to this, it would lose all subtlety and make Slendy look like he just walked home from the circus. Or if his back wasn't turned. It makes him look kind of mysterious.
If I had to criticise it, AND I DO, -_- I'd say the tentacles on his back are kind of all over the place and distract you from the rest of the picture.
Also, he doesn't look all that threatening. He just looks kind of casual, plus his tentacles look kind of like feathers so I'm not sure if he wants to kill me or tickle me.
And finally, where exactly is he? I'm glad he's on a black background, but it's JUST a black background. Where's the woods? Or the foggy streets or something?
Anyway, overall great picture :D
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GAGBAGCHEN Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student General Artist
Hey man,thanks for another critique:)Greatly appreciated.
So yeah,alot of flaws in this one,mainly it's because I had no idea who or what a Slenderman was,I was just given some pics of him,and was told to create my own take on him.
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Be-Strong--Believe Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
THERE WERE NOT A LOT OF FLAWS IT WAS GREAT XD I think I'm just getting pickier lol.
but yeah thanks for accepting it :)
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GAGBAGCHEN Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem,I accept all critiques,good or bad.You learn from them.
:)
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Be-Strong--Believe Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well thanks a lot :)
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